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Thank you so much for the review! I'll remember that. (Also, Condor is Scarlet's sister, so maybe I was way too vague lol)

thank you for the review!

@Altari There is a long, white button on the right side of the screen (If you are on a computer) that says something like "Edit your work" You can click ...

Much of my writing work is experience I've had in my life and things I've read about that inspired me. I'm very glad that you loved reading it! There is ...

thank you

Thank you so much! That was partly my intention of this poem. To sum it up, the point was that some things in life may be good, like joy, but ...

I loved it!

Thank you for the review!

Thank you for the review!

Thank you!

Cool! I'm happy you're satisfied with my review!

Never mind, i fixed it

I tried multiple times, the I wasn't able to fix the spacing without merging the paragraphs together. The second chapter doesn't seem to have that problem though! :D

Hi, Icy Woah! Okay, thanks for this review! I liked your suggestions for reducing the repetition in the dialogue and the natural information collection. I'll be sure to take note ...

Thank you for your review! Yes, it is my intention to make this partly for amusement. I am writing this partly from storytelling, so it is written a little bit ...