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yoshikrab

when life gives you lemons . . . i don't know . . . i don't like lemons

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Entropy - Chapter Three

    Also, I think you spelled "Entropy" wrong on the title

    Jan 22, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Entropy - Chapter Three

    Hey I'll review this as fast as possible today is my mid-terms day so I'm mostly going to be working, alright?

    Jan 20, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Entropy - Chapter Two

    You're welcome! Remember that the reviews are supposed to be suggestions and you don't have to listen to everything I have to say. Nevertheless, I appreciate you considering my opinions.

    Jan 20, 2021
  • Short Story » Humor, Narrative Re: Chronicles of Carina: Tales from the Brain Farm [Prologue]

    Why are three periods before the exclamation? I'm pretty sure this is to show the trailing off of dialogue. shrug? Thanks for the Review, though!

    Jan 20, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Entropy - Chapter One

    yw

    Jan 19, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: on examining life

    Jan 19, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Ricochet

    Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like my poem! You have an awesome day too!

    Jan 18, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Ricochet

    thanks for the review!

    Jan 17, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Cabalistic Corporations | Chapter 7

    oops! LandCorp isn't the capital of SkyCorp. Sorry for the confusion. LandCorp is a separate corporation to SkyCorp. Thank you so much for the review!

    Jan 17, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Cabalistic Corporations | Chapter 6

    Also, why is the Firecracker so flammable? If there is a boiler room inside of it that uses coal and such (correct me if this is incorrect, but I thought ...

    Jan 15, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Uncrossable Canyons

    I also appreciate your responses. :) I also sincerely hope that we can reach a common ground in the future. Have a great day.

    Jan 11, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Cabalistic Corporations | Chapter 4

    Thank you for the review @SpiritedWolfe! I know I haven't said this already, but your reviews are extremely informative and are exactly what I want. Thank you so much for ...

    Jan 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Uncrossable Canyons

    Thank you for the expression of your opinion. I hope it is okay for you if I express mine. You are saying that no one thinks using correct grammar all ...

    Jan 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Uncrossable Canyons

    I understand your sentiment. I was not trying to force you to correct your work-- I was simply stating how to fix it. I apologize for the misunderstanding. However, I ...

    Jan 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Cabalistic Corporations | Chapter 3

    Thanks for the review!

    Jan 9, 2021


I lingered round them, under that benign sky: watched the moths fluttering among the heath and harebells, listened to the soft wind breathing through the grass, and wondered how any one could ever imagine unquiet slumbers for the sleepers in that quiet earth.
— Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights