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yoshikrab

when life gives you lemons . . . i don't know . . . i don't like lemons

  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Entropy - Chapter Three

    Also, I think you spelled "Entropy" wrong on the title

    Jan 22, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Entropy - Chapter Three

    Hey I'll review this as fast as possible today is my mid-terms day so I'm mostly going to be working, alright?

    Jan 20, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Entropy - Chapter Two

    You're welcome! Remember that the reviews are supposed to be suggestions and you don't have to listen to everything I have to say. Nevertheless, I appreciate you considering my opinions.

    Jan 20, 2021
  • Short Story » Humor, Narrative Re: Chronicles of Carina: Tales from the Brain Farm [Prologue]

    Why are three periods before the exclamation? I'm pretty sure this is to show the trailing off of dialogue. shrug? Thanks for the Review, though!

    Jan 20, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Entropy - Chapter One

    yw

    Jan 19, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: on examining life

    Jan 19, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Ricochet

    Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like my poem! You have an awesome day too!

    Jan 18, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Ricochet

    thanks for the review!

    Jan 17, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Cabalistic Corporations | Chapter 7

    oops! LandCorp isn't the capital of SkyCorp. Sorry for the confusion. LandCorp is a separate corporation to SkyCorp. Thank you so much for the review!

    Jan 17, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Cabalistic Corporations | Chapter 6

    Also, why is the Firecracker so flammable? If there is a boiler room inside of it that uses coal and such (correct me if this is incorrect, but I thought ...

    Jan 15, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Uncrossable Canyons

    I also appreciate your responses. :) I also sincerely hope that we can reach a common ground in the future. Have a great day.

    Jan 11, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Cabalistic Corporations | Chapter 4

    Thank you for the review @SpiritedWolfe! I know I haven't said this already, but your reviews are extremely informative and are exactly what I want. Thank you so much for ...

    Jan 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Uncrossable Canyons

    Thank you for the expression of your opinion. I hope it is okay for you if I express mine. You are saying that no one thinks using correct grammar all ...

    Jan 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Lyrical Re: Uncrossable Canyons

    I understand your sentiment. I was not trying to force you to correct your work-- I was simply stating how to fix it. I apologize for the misunderstanding. However, I ...

    Jan 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Cabalistic Corporations | Chapter 3

    Thanks for the review!

    Jan 9, 2021


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