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yoshikrab

when life gives you lemons . . . i don't know . . . i don't like lemons

  • Short Story » Dramatic, Mystery / Suspense Re: Color of Pain

    Ahh I'm soooo late I've been off YWS for a while soo . . . Anyhow, thank you so much for the review!

    Feb 28, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Before the Dragon - 1.2

    I have been struggling with writer's block and thought may be if I posted these and got some reviews then it might fuel me to press on, and that seems ...

    Feb 28, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Before the Dragon - 1.1

    I yeeted her into an RP last year that was a modern AU on a college campus and decided that her goal was to out-frat-boy the frat boys xD and ...

    Feb 28, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Awakening Book 2 Chapter 1: Shocking

    Np! I did notice that this was the second installment, but I'd still suggest that even a book 2 needs some sort of extra explanation to remind the readers what ...

    Feb 27, 2023
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: An adventure with Nightshade: The Tree Wing Village

    Ah that makes sense. I could tell it was heavily inspired by WoF. I haven't actually seen Avatar, but i'll have to check it out.

    Feb 26, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: King of the Court v2 [CH4]

    Thank you for the review! They're all meant to give emphasis to a specific line within a work that needs the attention for some reason. Even when I got done ...

    Apr 18, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: King of the Court v2 [CH1]

    :'( i wrote a long, drawn-out reply to this, but yws ate it up . . . i'll just read all the reviews first, i think.

    Apr 3, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: LoaMR: Ch. II: The Intruder 1 (Reworked)

    ic ic

    Feb 21, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: (DRAFT) Miscreants: Inauguration - Chapter 2.4

    okie glad i could help then!

    Feb 15, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: (DRAFT) Miscreants: Inauguration - Chapter 2.4

    oooooooooohhh thats what miriam was for maybe i wasn't paying attention so i don't think it was your fault :]

    Feb 14, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: King of the Court v2 [CH6]

    Thanks for the review! I'm glad you enjoyed the flashback! If you're hoping for more stuff like that, I don't think you'll be disappointed, because most of Alex's teammates still ...

    Feb 5, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: LoaMR: Ch. I: Unforgotten Murder 6 (Reworked)

    :D

    Jan 31, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: LoaMR: Ch. I: Unforgotten Murder 6 (Reworked)

    oooh maybe I'll do that (ah but i wont be able to get as much review points so i dunno)

    Jan 30, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: King of the Court v2 [CH5]

    Heyo Mailice tysm for the review yosh here for the review review, hoping for you to review review review, in which i may perhaps respond with a review review review ...

    Jan 28, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, General Re: King of the Court v2 [CH4]

    and also for the flashback i used past tense, so i was intending for that to be an indicator that it's a flashback.

    Jan 7, 2022


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