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yoshikrab

when life gives you lemons . . . i don't know . . . i don't like lemons

  • Short Story » Fantasy, Romantic Re: An adventure with Nightshade: The Tree Wing Village

    Hey there dragonight9! I'll be reviewing your work today. First and foremost-- is this a Wings of Fire fanfic? I don't think it's been explicitly mentioned, but i'm assuming it ...

    Feb 26, 2023
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: LoaMR: Ch. II: The Intruder 2 (Reworked)

    Happy LRS! Well, since it is Last Reviewer standing, I guess I'll have to pull myself out of my reading on a weekday to review (although since it takes a ...

    Mar 7, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: LoaMR: Ch. II: The Intruder 1 (Reworked)

    hey there :] In the process, he meets the great-granddaughter of the murdered man, Emma Malven. This is just a small thing, because the readers already know who Emma is, ...

    Feb 19, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: (DRAFT) Miscreants: Inauguration - Chapter 2.4

    Heyo! It's been a while . . . well I'll just say hi. hi. “Where is William, anyway?” she murmured. Suddenly Gerhard noticed the slip of paper in her hand. ...

    Feb 13, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: LoaMR: Ch. I: Unforgotten Murder 6 (Reworked)

    itsame mario back again for another review so i guess i'm finally on the last part of chapter one, which is great, because I think my reviews have been so ...

    Jan 30, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: (DRAFT) Miscreants: Inauguration - Chapter 3.1

    i wonder when i'll run out of witty intros until then . . . wait i think i've already reached that point O-O Vast stone slabs of walls stretched in ...

    Jan 17, 2022
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: LoaMR: Ch. I: Unforgotten Murder 5 (Reworked)

    Hey Mailice! It's been a while since I've actually reviewed, but the weekend is here, so I should be able to get a few done. Anyways, this seems like a ...

    Jan 15, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Vampire in Stockholm

    Yikes . . . what a chilling poem! Your use of repetition, specific capitalization, and italicism were very nice touches. Honestly, I'm very impressed! With eyes closed and lips slightly ...

    Dec 18, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: LoaMR: Ch. I: Unforgotten Murder 4 (Reworked)

    Wow it's been a while. I think the last time I reviewed Loamr was a few weeks ago? I have finally been catching up to everything (And I will surely ...

    Dec 18, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Politics Re: (DRAFT) Miscreants: Inauguration - Chapter 2.3

    Heyo, it's been a while! Life has been giving me a few hard punches, but I think I dodged the most recent one??? Anyways, I found some spare time, and ...

    Dec 17, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: LoaMR: Ch. I: Unforgotten Murder 1 (Reworked)

    Heyo Mailice yoshicarb here for an review [by the way, i was wondering why you decided to make these chapters so long . . . wouldn't it make more sense ...

    Dec 5, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Politics Re: (DRAFT) Miscreants: Inauguration - Chapter 2.2

    Hello there general kenobi Lim it's me again, back for another review :D Gerhard didn’t know what the smaller things meant anymore, when they had been so bright and clear ...

    Dec 4, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Politics Re: (DRAFT) Miscreants: Inauguration - Chapter 2.1

    Ayo, itsame mario except if mario was a reviewer who loved reviewing awesome writing like yours! Also sorry about the barrage of notifications . . . I suddenly remembered to ...

    Dec 4, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Politics, Fantasy Re: (DRAFT) Miscreants: Inauguration - Chapter 1.2

    Hey Lim! Hope you missed me, because I'm back again. First of all, I really want to say how much I appreciate the author's note at the beginning. It's such ...

    Dec 4, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Politics Re: (DRAFT) Miscreants: Inauguration - Prologue

    Hey Lim! I'm back at reviewing, so from Mailice's suggestion, I'll start here! First, before I start anything, I want to say . . . you know Lady Lucretia is ...

    Dec 1, 2021


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