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Re: Masterpiece
Thank you so much for the review. However, I'm not so sure on the semi-colon. I agree, the sentence is a little awkward, but I don't think the semi-colon is ...
Aug 12, 2014 -
Re: Masterpiece
Thank you for your suggestion. I'll certainly take it into consideration. I wrote this piece trying to sound a bit above my age, when coming to certain wordings and things, ...
Aug 12, 2014 -
Re: Why I'm not dead right now.
I wish all people thought like this. For some, it isn't a thought that crosses their mind. This was wonderful to read, to know that some people realize. Thank you ...
Jun 18, 2014 -
Re: Tides--- Chapter 2, White Walls, and 3, Memories
Oh my word...Thank you. That means a lot. But, yeah. I just kind of write. I don't plan anything. I just write, because it feels much more natural. I create ...
Jun 18, 2014 -
Re: Tides---Chapter One, The Wind
Thanks for the review and the follow. I agree, the lengths of the paragraphs get wacky sometimes, but that's just how I write. I like a little variation. Uniformity in ...
May 27, 2014 -
Re: Tides---Chapter One, The Wind
Well, thanks. That was quite the compliment. Glad you enjoyed my writing. I work hard to make sure that I have no errors before I submit things on any website. ...
May 11, 2014 -
Re: Tides---Chapter One, The Wind
Thanks! I really appreciate the review. I see that a lot as well in my writing. I have trouble describing characters because I visualize them in my mind, and often ...
May 11, 2014
