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Re: Love so pretty yesterday.
Buttryfly line is excellent. Something once so beautiful but now nothing. Great stuff
Sep 22, 2009 -
Re: A Cutter's Lullaby
Great stuff. For starters the title is fantastic. I've never been in this mindset but the poem gives a bold insight into it.
Sep 22, 2009 -
Re: Autumn
I liked the flow of the poem. I liked how it looked on the page too! I also think autumn evokes all sorts of emotions in people so great choice ...
Sep 22, 2009 -
Re: Distance
'She loved your smile too.' Great line, I think everybody has felt like that before. I didn't realise about the 2:1 ratio so I checked your work out. All the ...
Sep 3, 2009 -
Re: A Ballad From The Broken Hearted
Hello, I don't feel I want to critique a poem in which you have clearly been so brave and so open. It was an interesting read and I do hope ...
Sep 3, 2009