yamatri

nice poem, I really liked the - I won't make it back to the shore line.

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thank u :-)

I really like it; you have some really nice lines in there.

thank you for the review, and yeah the "escaped with a brimming cup " It kind of meant it like -trying to overcome these dark thoughts of killing myself and ...

hey yosh , it was great reading your review, and no it was not a problem listening to your interpretation of the poem. every reader finds something that only they ...

I was kind of deliberately going for a shorter version in this poem, though I will give it a try to expand it may be, thank u very much for ...

thanku, I was going for the same theme as you mentioned -the tragedy of life - you understood the theme I was going or very clearly, I am really glad ...

a little late for romance and 50 years of love stored meant, they met and fell in love during their fifties, after encountering multiple heartbreak and kind of giving up ...

I want to read more .......next chapter plz

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there is a lot of growth in the relationship between sister, we also get to know more about their nature , Alainna is a bold, careless girl while solely is ...

thank u very much, I am very glad you enjoyed it

Ohk, now I get it .

wow ! my first guess was that it was about a male friend who got involved in crimes and drugs stuff and yeah, it's better not to mention details.

thank you very much, I am glad you enjoyed it :-)