yakitsa

You are welcome!

Hey! I really liked this poem, the rhythm with which it flowed, the way you expressed do much and the meaning you gave. I normally wouldn't italicize the words you ...

Teehee! This was hilarious! I loved it! ''His answer wasn't delivered, for my love was slipping, tripping, falling at the blame of a banana peel.'' That. Was. Amazing! The way ...

Thanks alot! I'll make the changes!

Something for you too read...!

Not really...I'm not great at reviewing short stories! (or anything for that matter...*laughs*) But, I look forward to what happens next!

Wow! This is a huge turn from the last chapter!

Oh dear...I'm already all crazy about Blood of Olympus (dyou read Percy Jackson?) and now this too!

Thanks so much! Poet's dream, huh? Well, that's something for me to ponder about...! Thanks again...

Thanks! I'm really glad you liked it! -The one who will always trouble you into reading her works (A.K.A Yastika02!)

This poem is beautiful, I enjoyed it. "not from the sun or anything like that" I felt the line 'or anything like that' was too casual for a poem so ...

Thanks so much!

Thanks! It's nice to know you liked it!

Hee hee...glad you could have a laugh! Thanks for visiting!

Thanks!