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Thanks love

Thanks love

Thanks for the feedback! You're very nice. I actually read some poetry, and wanted to play around with the brackets. I'll think about altering the poem, though! Thanks again.

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thanks for the feedback!

thank you for all the pointers. the lack of capitalisation is me abusing poetic license, but i'll keep it in mind.

thank you for the feedback! i'll work on the formatting for sure.

thank you for the feedback! i'll work on the formatting and length of verses for sure.

You've been incredibly kind. I realise the formatting is a complete mess- I definitely intend to work on that. Think of this as the idea for a prospective work? Made ...

i see the sarcasm

you're so kind

is that good or bad? did you enjoy it? *nervous*

Thanks so much! Glad you liked it!

Thanks so much! That was very helpful! I'll make the changes...the next two chapters are already posted, just in case you're interested!

Whoops! I keep getting the wrong link! I'll just paste the definition here, 'expensive, ostentatious clothing and jewellery.' Thanks!