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I won't really mention grammar since you basically said you didn't want to hear about it (though it is important)...All I will say is that I'm not a huge fan ...

First thing- about your poll....I wouldn't even bother with the poll, don't ever doubt yourself. Post, and keep posting without relying on other people to tell you. Writing is about ...

A large black and red dragon dived down from the sky and blew a large breath of fire onto the ship’s deck. Some of the crew caught fire and started ...

I don't see how you came to the end conclusion. You make the claim that thinking is your purpose early in the text, but then in the end say you ...

“Are too.” Nine-year-old Apprentice Crysi “Yes. Her name is Crysi and she’s ten years old Minor thing, but always try to remember details so you can avoid saying two different ...

I'm going to be honest- I didn't really like it much. It wasn't original, it was just a bunch of fairytales thrown together in a way that has been overdone. ...

I didn't like how it started- I feel like there was no set up, no description- we were just instantly thrown into a scene and it didn't really draw me ...

The city loomed over her. A thick layer of smoke hung over the rooftops of the tall buildings. The city was a hub of life in the centre of a ...