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Re: confessions of a lost tourist
It was really good - you captured the mood perfectly, and the dialoug was nicely spaced. Just one thing. When you said "the cops will here", I think it should ...
Jun 6, 2005 -
Re: The Truth About Clara
That was really sweet. I'd like to know what happens. Please keep it going. xocsunx 8)
Jun 3, 2005 -
Re: So here you are again...
I guess that's kind of a problem I have. I kind of forget about the gramatical stuff. :wink:
Jun 3, 2005