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Thank you! :) I'll take this advice into consideration the next time I write. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Thank you! :) I'll take this advice into consideration the next time I write. I'm glad you enjoyed it! :)

Thank you! I did notice that I lacked on describing Leila, especially on how she should be more afraid. Thank you for pointing that out! I'll watch out next time.

Ermergerddd this made me so happy x) Thank you for the kind review! I do have to say that I agree with the clunking of heels thing. I totally forgot ...

Thank you! It's been a long while since I've last written a story, this one is from being away for two months, almost three in think. I'll watch out for ...

Thank you for the kind review! :) I didn't notice that first grammatical error apparently. Thanks for pointing it out! I'll be more careful next time. -Lisa

Thank you ^_^

Thank you for the review ^-^ Since this was my first poem, I don't think it was that much of a good start ._. But I respect your advice, and ...

All right. Thank you for the advice! :)

I'm going to do so now :P

Thank you so so much for the nice review! ^-^ I'm glad you enjoy it. I'm inexperienced in poetry too but I guess this might be a good start? Haha. ...

Thank you. :) I'm really happy that you enjoyed it.

Hi there! As for the "The anonymous person had begun to raise her temper. He sounded like a bot. ", It was not a typo at all. I was implementing ...

Hi! :3 Thank you for the advice. I'll try to describe more in the future chapters. For the word "embalmed", I've seen being used somewhere else but it goes along ...

Hi :3 I was trying to drag the chapter a bit, since what I wanted to write in this chapter was quite short, so I apologize for this. It seems ...