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Thanks, that was helpful. I don't really capitalize my "I" much because I don't really check for that but I will in future. I never noticed the pattern that you ...

That isn't part of the poem ( obviously ) i just felt like adding it.

it's good but i don't like the "what if i burp and give you a fright? " line ... it is a bit weird

Nice poem,I think you should call it Be or Live