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Re: Random 2nd Chapter
Thanks Kerza! I'm been thinking about putting that stuff in chapter 3 or 4. Curious- I'll send a PM your way when i get it done :) I'm glad you ...
Apr 20, 2010 -
Re: Us Pirates We're Hardcore ( a Tik Tok by Ke$ha parody)
Pure genius!!! Haha I'm going to be humming this in my head all day! :smt005
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: The sea is cruel
Very nice! For me, it was very exciting. Just fix the grammatical errors that have been pointed out, and it will run much smoother. I would love to see a ...
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: Martha's Baby
Good job! The only suggestion I have is to maybe add in more descriptions here and there. I think it would really draw us into the story more. Like how ...
Apr 19, 2010 -
Re: Random First Chapter
Wow thanks so much for that review!!! It's EXTREMELY helpful; you've pointed out a lot of things i would've overlooked before, and I will have fun adding in some detail, ...
Apr 13, 2010 -
Re: Random First Chapter
Based on the movie, I'd have to agree with you. I like my vampires with a bit more GRR! in them :) It's alright, and I'm glad you liked it! ...
Apr 11, 2010 -
Re: Random First Chapter
Wow, that's very good! I think that it's a very good idea and I could read a lot more. I think though you didn't need that much spacing through it, ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: Random First Chapter
lol, thanks for your review! Harshness is not a problem here, feel free to go all out :) And for the record, i still haven't read any book of the ...
Apr 9, 2010 -
Re: Fourth chapter to my werewolf story!(Stiiiil untitled.)
I still love this story. Can’t wait to find out what happens next!!
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: The Heart Of A God ( Intro and Ch 1)
Just wanted to say thanks for posting this. :) It’s incredible!! I can’t wait until you write more!
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Addictions (1) -Edited-
I really loved it! I thought that the characters were very real, and the dialogue was very good. I can’t wait to see more of this. Keep writing! :)
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Hands
Oh my gosh I loved it! I love everything about it! Could you PM me when you post more?
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Sun Drops
I loved it!! The beginning caught me- I really liked the line about how death doesn’t discriminate. The exploding sun was pretty cool, too. I can’t wait to read more!
Apr 7, 2010 -
Re: Still Untitled- Part 1!
yes, i get what you mean. i suppose i could change the name for copyright's sake, but it will always be rydia in my head. i wasn't planning on getting ...
Sep 24, 2009 -
Re: Still Untitled- Part 1!
A lot of other writers have the same issues, code names or types on which their characters are based on for inspiration. This is how those 'who would play who' ...
Sep 23, 2009