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I liked this :) It held my attention from the beginning, and at the fifth line I was like 'Woah!' and suddenly everything fit together and I was pulled right ...

Hey, I'm finally looking at some of your stuff :) I think this is excellent. Personally, the first line didn't catch me. It just felt to obvious. At the beginning ...

"Brandon, please behave! For once on one trip, do not be a sour puss and leave the girl crying. You are a fine looking young man, but soon enough you ...

Wanderings take people many places, but mine are limited for the most part to a castle in Filemonia. What a boring little country Filemonia is. A small country North of ...

Water flushes down the street carrying bits of paper and fallen leaves towards the gutters that line the street. This was the only line that tripped me up for a ...

Crawl ‘We’ll go to the base in Boulder,’ Ira was telling his captain, Mayes, as they looked over their map in the back of the wagon, ‘I want to avoid ...

‘We’ll have to track him down,’ Bael said to his Men as They made Their way through the dark labyrinths of Underworld, ‘He can not have gotten far, not as ...

Change Violet ran ahead of Louis, no comma and spun around in a circle under the falling snow with a squeal. She stopped briefly, her mouth open and her tongue ...

Hey! I liked this :) It actually put me in a good mood, which is saying a lot XD You're getting better with every poem I see, and you were ...

Hey Soul, wow it's been ages since I've read something of yours O_O Anyway, I liked this. By the end I was wanting more :) If I can offer a ...

This is definitely my favorite poem of yours, Suki. You know how bad I am at reviewing and understanding this stuff, but I just want you to know that I ...

Ok, THIS is now my favorite piece of yours! XD It's hilarious! I'm reading/reviewing in a library so I had to keep myself from laughing out loud xD. I was ...

The night grew old, his fellow knights I know they are two different words, but the repetition of ‘night (knight)‘ stopped me for a second. Maybe you could call them ...

“Welcome brothers to this Brilliant day! This glorious, glorious day” Eyes gazing into the dark endless sky past the eternal forests and into the snow capped mountains. This sounds weird. ...

Another good in-between chapter. I liked it. I absolutely LOVED the twist you threw in. It was so unexpected my jaw dropped and I had to read the sentence twice. ...