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Hello! I'll be reviewing you story, just remember that what ever I write you don't have to take too seriously... That night was really spooky for people who don't like ...

Hi, I real like the story, but there were a few mistakes. Please don't be mad by me pointing them out. After all, you were the one who asked for ...

This actually brought tears to my eyes, it's sad and yet beautiful. I know someone how has gone though something like this, and the entire time of reading it he ...

Hi, first I love this! You wrote it with a lot of passion, which seem to fill the paper. There was one mistake in which you might thing of changing... ...