xMidnightWriterx

Heya, ooh this is getting really intriguing :D I didn't see any spelling mistakes and grammar isn't my thing so lets move on to the few things I picked out. ...

and not see Ann there next to her. Should being "seeing" not "see". high school in the history of the world. I like this. Quite dramatic :D They had actually ...

Oooh, I like this. Very emotional :D She still hadn’t gotten over the terrible headache from the night before. This was only making it all worse. This is good because ...

Hello! I really do like this, but I'll come to those points in a minute. First the nit picks, sorry: as told by the elderly people, I'm guessing that these ...

Hello Sassykat, This is really intriguing. I like how you were flipping from the present to the past becasue it really shows how the character is feeling when he is ...

Heya! This is really good, very descriptive :D I'm guessing this is just a random descriptive piece, yeah? Do correct me if I'm wrong. Your description is wonderful and so ...

Haha, I love this. I have to ask is that a real desire of yours? It seems like such a good one. You have two little mistakes: a character based ...

Hello :D I have noticed that your writing is very speech based. You have a lot more speech then anything else. I know it can be tricky to add the ...

Hello ally. :D This is a really good piece and I really like it. Shadow has already pointed out the grammar mistakes, which is good becasue I'm not good with ...

Hello, I'm going to be reviewing you post now :) This is very short and I'm a bit confused as to where you're going with it and what its purpose ...

Heya VBall! I'll be reviewing you now :D. Ugh! Who the heck bangs on your door that hard in the middle of the night? Seeing as my parents are away ...

Heya, One thing I should point out is grammar is really not my best point so I've learnt to stay away from it during reviewing. I read through confetti's review ...

Wow, that was kind of creepy... The way you tell your story is very intense. I love how the story twisted from just one of Abbie's friends telling it as ...

Hello Kayla!! I will be reviewing your work now!! :) This is a good begining but with a bit of revising it could be a lot better. I did get ...

Haha, this was really good!! I really liked it!! Why in the gumdrop Who in the unicorn was going to stop me? I really like this bits. Really cute :D ...