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This is very David Bowie like, which is why I enjoy this so much. It makes me chuckle and smile. The last line especially was good. There is a bit ...

Calix is a very interesting character. He seems fairly well developed, but Chad seems a bit mysterious. I'm very anxious to know about him. This is a oneshot, evidently, and ...

I enjoy the repetition of the word "Pretty." Usually it's lame, but in this song it works. Well this song actually has quite a bit of repetition, but it's not ...

Oooh. It's splendiferous. However, the song isn't that deep. It just really only shows surface emotions and such... But then again that seems to be rather common when it comes ...

This touched my heart. Cancer is a saddening topic, and honestly I did not expect that to come out of this poem. I honestly teared up a little. This was ...

Despite the fact that the rhyming is a little stereotypical, I do adore the story that this poem is conveying. Music is a beautiful thing, a beautiful inspiration. I am ...

This is a very nice, raw, emotional-- I guess you could say song. It reminds me vaguely of Flyleaf, but that's probably because I imagine the singer singing this one. ...

Well, this is a rather sad piece of work. It's a very good start, but I suggest putting more feeling into your poetry. Describe your feelings. Compare them to something ...

It's a lot better than the first chapter. I do have a strong sense of who Connor is, but Justin is still a mystery. I do not feel any real ...

- Ross, my dear. Your writing is good, but descriptions seem to be your weak point. They are still a part of writing I am working on. You depend greatly ...

Alright. This poem does seem to be a very.. Vent-ish sort of thing. I can really feel raw, unbridled emotion rolling off of it. I can hear rock in the ...

I’ve never been good at Lyrical Poetry, or just poetry in general so I really admire you for pulling it off so nicely. There is a nice steady beat to ...

Cracks in the Sidewalk- Critique Basic ideas: 1. Liz and Jack have a rocky relationship. 2. Jack is a homosexual male who lives in a somewhat strict catholic household. 3. ...