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  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Mr. Perfect

    i want to read more! i can't believe this really happened to you, it must have been so cool. I cant wait to read the next part, oh i hate/love ...

    Sep 21, 2008
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: The murderous suicide

    It sounds almost like a suicide note, creepy but good, like a small child talking about something that it is too young to talk about, but it must, if you ...

    Sep 21, 2008
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Waste Not, Sweet Bernadette

    I love that poem, it was so sweet, it reminded me of the old fashioned poems by cecilia Mary barker of the flower fairies, they were short and sweet as ...

    Sep 21, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Skin

    That was beautiful, so inspiring, magic :D i loved it, i loved how you described your pain so well, instead of the usual "gaping hole in my heart" it was ...

    Sep 21, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Light and Suicide

    That was amazing. It almost made me cry, i am such a wuss but still it has that affect on me. It was powerful and i loved it, but i ...

    Sep 20, 2008
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: You

    That was beautiful, its so... i dont know how to describe it! Pure is a good word, it is pure and unstoppable love and passion. I thought you did an ...

    Sep 20, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Serendipity In Hell; 1

    i thought that was amazing, you are very talented! i was a bit confused at first, because i think it could have had more explanation about what the main character ...

    Sep 20, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, General Re: A Bloodied Rose part one

    I thought it was brilliant. I felt myself getting drawn into the story, it was pulling me in, i wanted to know everything about the characters. One thing though, i ...

    Sep 19, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Mansion chapter 1

    i thought that was great! i loved how you described the setting, it really made me feel like it was there, but i thought you could have told us more ...

    Sep 19, 2008
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, General Re: Looking Glass Ch.1

    wow i love the cliffhanger - i want to read more! i think it needs some more though, more explanation, more descriptions - what do the sprites look like? what ...

    Sep 18, 2008


You have to write the book that wants to be written. And if the book will be too difficult for grown-ups, then you write it for children.
— Madeleine L'Engle, Author