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Hey there, Satan! I'm not really going to give you a very helpful review, seeing as this doesn't really strike me as a piece that needs a proper review. It's ...

Glad I could help, and thanks. That'll be great.

Back again! This seems longer... Have you added more lines? If not, it was probably just that I first read this with my eyes half shut. Anyway, I like that ...

Hey again silent! I think this version is better for giving us a deeper insight into the character's life. We now know more about why she's thinking about leaving her ...

Me again! Just dropping back in to say I think the added information about her previous killings is good. It's not much, but it really helps to give us an ...

Hey Lena! I thought it would be easier to explain about expanding the ending here rather than in a PM. So. I do like the ending, but when he says ...

Hey again! I just wanted to say that I think the changes you made have definitely benefited your story. The feelings you express really help to make me want to ...

Hey Phantom =] I'm sorry that it's taken me this long to review this for you, but I've been taking a month long break from YWS. This may explain why ...

Hey Phanny =] Thanks for the PM! I'm going to go through this as I read, okay? Now - onto the review! about them, he started to tell him, I ...

Hey =] I'd just like to say a massive 'thank you' to everyone who has helped me edit this story. The reviews you have all given have been wonderfully helpful! ...

Hey =] Thanks for the tips and comments. I'll try and re-write/ re-arrange the first couple of paragraphs so they read better and I'll add in a bit more detail ...

Hey =] Thank you all so much for your reviews and comments - you've all been so helpful! Thechocolatewritingcat- Just to let you know that the 'her,' is the girl ...

Hey Thank you so much for your reviews, they've been very helpful. I can't believe you think i'm a strong writer - that's so nice of you to say :D ...