xDudettex

Hey =] As you've been so kind to review my Untitled stroy, I though I'd return the favour :D So it looks like I'm a tad late and all of ...

Hey =] I agree with EmmVeePi that this was an entertaining and original story. I've certainly never read a story from the point of view of a virus before. It ...

Hey =] Sorry - I was watching Gossip Girl lol Nit-piks first (if I can find any); It was an average day apart from that; me and Kels got our ...

Hey =] Welcome to YWS! I'm Dudette :D Nit-piks first; The jock, hot shot ego maniac that was who I loved. - I think this sentence is missing some punctuation. ...

Hey =] Welcome to YWS! I'm Dudette :D Wow, this piece made me smile. It's so optimistic - well, the overall concept anyway. I so have days when I think, ...

Hey =] Wow! This was super creepy! I loved the imagery you used and I could really imagine myself in the forest with the faceless girl. I definitely think that ...

Hey =] I really liked this :) I couldn't find any other mistakes that haven't already been pointed out to you. I could really feel the pain that your MC ...

Hey =] I agree with ..:Ced:.. in that I think that this piece is really moving. Even though the concept is sad, I enjoyed reading it. I think you have ...

Hey =] I really enjoyed reading this. It flowed well and the description of the library was lovely :) So the narrator is Rebecca's Mum, right? Because to me, the ...

Hey =] Thanks for the PM! Nit-piks first; It's better to try valiantly and fail than to rest between mediocrity and average-ness.” - I don't know if it would read ...

Hey =] I really enjoyed reading this! It was nice to read something of yours :D I couldn't find any mistakes that haven't already been pointed out/sorted, so I'm just ...

Hey =] I like the idea of how you wrote this! He said it the night before and then before that. - Okay, it might just be me, but I ...

Hey =] I've just read both parts of this and I really enjoyed it. This story seems really original - I haven't read a story from the point of view ...

Hey =] Well everyone else seems to have already picked out the mistakes, but I really felt that I needed to comment on how much I enjoyed reading this. Even ...

Hey - me again =] This one's really good too! I wish I could write lyrics as good as this :D The road’s paved in silver And the smiles are ...