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Hey! Thanks for the PM :) Revenge isn't my stronger point. 'stronger' should be 'strong' - it sounds better. "Why are you dating him? Do you feel sorry for him? ...

Hey! I just wanted to say how much I enjoyed reading this. It flowed well and I liked the way that you've already explained character dynamics so well, when it's ...

Hey! I thought this piece was cute and I like the way you told it from all of the character's perspectives. I will point out a few things I noticed; ...

Hey! I'm going to take a shot at reviewing this for you :) So, first of all, I liked it. It made me smile and I could relate to it ...

Hey! Dudette here to review for you :) So... Jix looked back to where Teric was having a headstand contest with a tree and ended up falling over, again, in ...

Hey! I haven't been active on here for a while so forgive me if this review isn't very helpful :) First off, thanks for a great read. It was an ...

Hey neversaynikki! I haven't reviewed on here for about six months, so forgive me if I'm not very helpful :) First off. Wow! I loved the intensity of this piece. ...

Hey =] So, like the others have said, there's not much to review here. I liked this piece though and I think you have a good title for it =] ...

Hey =] Welcome to YWS! I'm gonna take a shot at reviewing this for you! Prologue; If you could go inside a book what would happen? I think you have ...

Hey =] I'm gonna take a shot at reviewing this for you! A young man called Billy O'Hara walked down a desolate forgotten road. This is ok for an opening ...

Hey funkyreg =] I'm gonna take a shot at reviewing this for you! First off, I like the title. It's different and caught my attention =] My palms were sweating ...

Hey =] I enjoyed reading this chapter. The reader finally gets a chance to see Kailey as a seperate person rather than one of seven sisters - if that makes ...

Hey =] Welcome to YWS! I'm gonna take a shot at reviewing this for you =] First off - I like the title. It's different =] And then he kissed ...

Hey GoldenQuill =] I'm gonna take a shot at reviewing this for you! It was all her fault. Nice hook =] Her curly ginger hair blew in the quivering cold ...

Hey KnightlyAngel =] I enjoyed reading this and I think it flowed well. This is hard to review - as it's a letter and not a story full of dialogue ...