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I posted the next scene.

Also, may I ask what you mean by "white background" it seemed important to the poem but I dont really get what you meant by it. It stood for the ...

Thanks :)

My user name isn't odd, it's the abbreviation for my favorite band Cradle of Filth xD

It had nothing to do with Snow White, I wasn't even thinking about that when I wrote it o_o and thanks everyone :D

The form is right actually. In my class the first thing we learned about sestinas is that the form to the words can be changed as long as the root ...

I really enjoyed your work, and admire your views of both agony and irony. It reminds me very much of the song "unhearted" by Automatic Loveletter, "I sit in the ...

I'm 14, not 11... but thanks.

"I work to lose with no gain."- why do you need to repeat this line twice? For the repetition. I guess I should have put this poem under lyric poetry ...

The lines are supposed to be like this. It's a sonnet.

Enjambment is when you write a sentence over two lines or more. Like this: You found the truth In the bark of a gun And the roar of a plane ...

Thank you >=]

Thanks, I was going for a dark dream-like feel. It is mostly describing how I feel, how I just want to wake up from my life.

Yes she really was called a whore... specifically a 'harlot'. And it pretty much tells you everything in the poem, you just need to read in between the lines. I'm ...

I guess another name you could choose for this could be "Fight Over Flight". But then again I'm pretty bad at coming up with names... xD