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Re: Modern World
To be honest, the first stanza is very boring. I think you need something more eye-catching, to get the reader interested. But then it gets better.....and better. The last stanza ...
Apr 26, 2007 -
Re: nature is the only constant.
thank you both. but is there anything you can think to change?
Apr 24, 2007 -
Re: The reason Curbs were Invented
I'ma just say that the ending was amazing. brilliant. as well as the entire beginning.
Apr 22, 2007 -
Re: For Walt, with Reverent Indifference
PERFECTO. I love this. Could I perhaps put this in my signature??? Haha. It's just so beautiful!
Apr 20, 2007 -
Re: Against my will
Rain, blood, and tears are all cliche images and subjects. I would step away from those. You've got a good idea here, and I think expanding it would do it ...
Apr 20, 2007 -
Re: Scraping away the sound
I agree with every single thing Mad said. There you go, haha. Nothing else to say except what he said. =P
Apr 20, 2007 -
Re: The YWS Classics List Nominations
The Awakening ~Kate Chopin
Apr 19, 2007 -
Re: YWS Recent Books Debate
the historian! I am glad. and HeadInTheClouds, our avatars are very similar. hehe. =P
Apr 19, 2007 -
Re: Hourglass No. 2
what Shriek said. O_O but really, the shortness did bother me. you didn't seem to put as much into it as you did the first chapter. however, your descriptions are ...
Apr 14, 2007 -
Re: The Crucible
my school put on that play, and i thought it was amazing. the salem witch trials are so darn fascinating. and yes, i agree. the ending was really good.
Apr 10, 2007