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Re: Falling
I like it. It's dark and mysterious. If you would let me, I'm going to dissect this poem, just so I can get a better understanding of what's going on. ...
May 17, 2014 -
Re: Fire of the springs: A sneak peak. Comments Are most Welcome!!
I like this. There are, however, a few things that irk me about this. For one, the language. I like things with more... "conversational" or "common" wordings. I'd say "cell ...
May 17, 2014 -
Re: The World (a 5-7-5 poem)
This was a great poem. I must admit I'm not a big fan of poems that don't rhyme, but this is still pretty good. I like how the poem starts ...
May 17, 2014 -
Re: The Cap'n's Wife
This was great. Also, it was very well-done. I like how the Captain's wife is really his shadow. Maybe that has something to do with... well, I can't think of ...
May 17, 2014