writingmouse_13

Wow! Did not expect that! Can't wait till your done with the next part!

Thanks for the PM! Great as always. I love how in this part the emotions change from frightened to exhilaration and exitement. It's such a big change. Can't wait to ...

You already know that I love the story, but this helped! The story is getting so good!

Oh my gosh! I'm not going to correct anything because I didn't see anything to fix. You've put in a ton more details. Thanks for the PM, can't wait to ...

Like everyone else has been saying, very creepy... I'm starting to think this is a ghost story, but so far your writing has suprised me! I really don't know what's ...

Again I have been beaten to the editing... But it was great!! I love the story, I think I know what happens next... or maybe not. This story is so ...

I love the new chapter! I have absolutely no clue what's going on, but that's ok. I think it's important that you have this mystery element in the story, most ...

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it. I realize I made some mistakes, but my excuse for that is that I had just written it and stupidly forgot to edit ...