writerwithacause

Hey, theotherone! There's not much I can add, most of the things have been said above. You forgot a "d" in the following sentence: and a "[" here: Other than ...

Hello, RKnight! I'm impressed by your description style... so fascinating, in a way that it makes the reader focus on your story. The first chapter is neither too short, or ...

Hey, Dreamwalker! I'm sorry I can't come up with any suggestion because your poem is wonderful! Apart from the punctuation 'mistakes' that others have pointed out (and that don't matter ...

You're missing the point. It's not about Erik (evil part) vs Raoul (good part), love -- as described in both the movie and book -- is more than this, it ...

Dear J, Welcome back! I was going to post this on your wall, but since it has to do with this poem, I think I should post it as a ...

Shoirt, but emotional. I can't say I did not enjoy it, although I would have rather read a more complex poem. It somehow reminds me of haiku poems, although I ...

This is one of the few times when I've seen a poem formatted this way for a reason. It helps a lot, indeed, as mentioned above by SophiaBurnette. You've done ...

I liked this, and the rhyming, for once, did not seem forced. There are few poems I've read today that were not using rhyming just as a "tool", yours is ...

The world is turning red, and I, we, are in the blush of the morning. -- what a great association of words (red-blush) The world is turning red, and I, ...

he first one and "Stand Still" are great! Great use of imagery and it wa all so lyrical and beautiful. Congratulations! Really loved these: The tender sands lend themselves to ...

RHyming isn't your best skill, but it was still an enjoyable poem. I liked the structure (how you divided it into 4 lines and stanzas... Quite interesting poem. :)

I found it a little amusing too! At first, I wondered -- wait... what the? Dear hand? What does this writer have in mind? =) But then I read it ...

I didn't have the chance to read your other poems, but your rhyming scheme seems forced to me as well. You know what? Just get rid of it! Poetry is ...

Hey, this is a nice poem! I like this part: When I was young I became no one Silent to avoid the unavoidable Myself, I shunned and became no one[/i] ...

Heaven’s a bad place to be, At least if you're as broken as me. If the tears you cry are fake, and lying and cheating is all you make. -- ...