writervid

Of course! Happy to help!

Hi! I was wondering if you would like me to dissect this line by line with edits per line? I figured I might be overstepping my bounds if I just ...

Ahhh thank you so much! You're right about the long script thing; I was just in such a rush that I didn't have time to split it up! This definitely ...

This was definitely helpful to me! I just took out the videographer scene and added some dialogue to the scene where he drugs the mom to slow down the pacing ...

Thank you! :D I completely understand lol, we just had our first dance rehearsal. What show are you doing?

Ahh, thank you so much! I was in dire need of feedback, especially because this is my first time writing a play! I'm working on fixing all your edits now ...

Thank you so much for your review! And yeah, I can never quite format the way I want to on YWS, but I'm changing that on my google doc now. ...

Thank you so much for your review! It's definitely been helpful. :)

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Hello there! Writervid here to review! Okay, so the first thing I would like to do is talk to you about, not tour piece, but the meaning of a prologue. ...

Hi! Thank you for your kind words! And you TOTALLY got what I was trying to do with the ending there. You're actually the first person who read this that ...

Hi! Thank you! :D I'll fix those grammar errors.

Hi! Thank you for your review! I'll fix those things.

Thank you for your review!

Hi! Thank you for your review! Do you have any specific suggestions on the grammar and structure?

Thank you for your review!