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"Please. May I please have my journal back." My voice found a certain lightness and my facial expression became serious. " For some reason this part doesn't seem entirely right ...

After a long wait I see the next Chapter of All Babies are Blessings has been revealed. Amazing as were the other 13 chapters. I liked it a lot and ...

A very good starting concept to a story but not enough to quite understand. I can't really identify with this character at all and I'm not entirely sure why she ...

Great story. No immature typos, or grammatical errors that I could find. I read both parts 1 and 2 and I have to say this was absolutely hilarious. I was ...

I see the basics have been covered; 2:1 ratio, grammar, ect. However, you are not writing like an author who knows your character. What you are writing is much more ...

I know you're supposed to give suggestions when you critique but I don't think i can even bring myself to demean such a beautiful piece of work. I just read ...

I like the format. A diary is unique as well as a way to be able to jump from event to event without having to worry about connecting them or ...

Navigate away in disgust huh? More like plead for the next part. I agree with 100xstupid, a little hard to follow but I'm assuming that it will get easier as ...

Sounds like this is going to develop into a highly eventful story. I like how the plot gets started right away and that we receive a little flashback/foreshadowing(maybe.) The only ...

I enjoyed it and though I'm an only an amateur I would say pretty good for a "filler chapter" . The only complaint (if you can even call it that) ...