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Re: Of Love
I really enjoyed this piece. I like where you say I am a fool to doubt my feelings, because it is what most people go through. Good job with this, ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Diary of a Lost Soul
Hey there! I reallllllly enjoyed this though there were a few minor problems. Like someone said, you shouldve stated whether or not it was a girl or guy, im thinking ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: deleted
This was really good actually. I really enjoyed how you wrote it. You wrote about a good topic too. All in all, i say good job (:
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: Keys
Hey there, im not sure if it is just me but i really didn't understand this. Maybe if it could add a bit more interpretation it could be more clear ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: Lying little Kate
That was interesting (: I think the rythm needed work as the person above me said but overall it was really good
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: It's hard to be anything
amazing!
Jun 1, 2011 -
Re: Sisterly Affection
Great poem! this reminded me so much of my sisters
Jun 1, 2011