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What I liked about this poem was that you explored more then just one meaning of the word lost I also rely like the first stanza it grabbed my attention ...

hmmm, I actually like the repetition it sort of caught my attention and made me want to finish the poem, if that makes any sense. There were two lines that ...

Wow, this is haunting, it's very good, you had my heart beating twice as fast by the time I reached the end. No! He won’t. He can’t. He does. I ...

This poem was very good! I particularly like this phrase: You showed me what it was like to cry And what it was like to fall in love And now ...

I looked up at the sunset as it sank out of veiw. But the stars came out and shined queit bright. "How many stars are there?" I said to myself, ...

hmm, it's okay. The rhyming is a little strange it sounds like a ...... oh what's it called...... Fortune Cookie! Looking at your other poems I noticed some one else ...