wonderland

Well, that really hits hard with me. Very well written and it seemed to me somewhat of a daydream. I found this poem exceptional, with a wonderful message at the ...

That was very interesting, but i feel you one question unanswered, which is why!? You give lovely description, but there was never an exact reason as to why the devil ...

Wow You are simply an amazing poet. Your imagery was strong and beautiful, and I really didn't feel like this was just a poem. I found it a wickedly wonderful ...

Well, that was the definition of a cliff hanger. I liked your descriptions at the beginning, that was strong and beautiful. I'm also eager to find out what happens next. ...

This was very, very good. Your MC was outstanding. Her voice was strong, and you can really tell she loved her husband a lot. This was a very well-written piece. ...

You rhyme! That is so enviable! Your poem was very, very good, The only thing i'd suggest doing would be to break it up, so the reader gets a chance ...

That was kinda of adorable in a weird way. I totally agree with Elinor Brynn. You could add so much more and make this poem more amazing then it already ...

Alright, so, your style of writing is sort of confusing. The way you write in first person, yet have other peoples thoughts. Thank you for explaining that. Now onto your ...

Okay, Truthfully, I haven't read the other 12 parts. but I'll get to that. I promise! Now, i can't say anything plot wise, because I haven't a clue whats going ...

YOu have grammar mistakes in there that can be found just re-reading your work. Also, slow it down and add description, emotion, anything and everything to make a story great. ...

So, this is your take on why Booth killed Lincoln? Sorry, I'm Canadian, so, i don't really get it. It made me smile though. it was super happy, which is ...

That was very strong and very sad. Your imagery is beautiful and so intense, it's like I can see into the characters mind, which is very freaky. Your narrator was ...

This was fairly short and simple, which was interesting. You do have some grammar mistakes, that are simple to find if you go back and reread it. Now, emotions? her ...

Short Story? Seriously, format this and you have a really good monologue. I really loved this. It was sort cute, and sort of flighty. I totally know what your MC ...

And thats how it ends? It was interesting, i'll give you that, but (Maybe I'm missing something because I have no idea what 'Blood Brothers' is) what does the title ...