wonderingkate

Bonjour! :) I'm Kate. I really liked this story, but (there's always a 'but' isn't there?) I found a few things that you need to clarify. First off, what happened ...

Bonjour! I did not read this..I am commenting to tell you that you need to keep your pieces under a 1000 words if you want reviews. Most people don't have ...

Bonjour! I'm Kate. I really enjoyed this piece and encourage you to finish it. ;) The curiosity of the first 'part' was wonderful! Hmmm..could we be dealing with a mystery? ...

Bonjour! I'm Kate and I will be reviewing your piece. You had my full attention from the very first sentence. I loved the action, as well as the setting. You ...

Bonjour! :) I'm Kate and I'll be reviewing you today! I liked this pretty well, and I definitely see where it has great potential. Today. A two day. Horrible, horrible ...

Hello, I'm Kate. I really liked this! With a little editing, this will be great. All I noticed, specifically, is that you use choppy sentences. Use commas! :) I suggest ...

Hello! I'm Kate. I see that your new, so your excused, but you are suppose to review at least two stories before you post your own. This story has potential. ...

Hey Logan! I'm Kate. I love this 'opening' and really encourage you to finish it. Much to my dismay, I do the same thing all the time. Start writing a ...

Hello, I'm Kate. I have to say this was pretty well written and I think you have a true talent in writing. Although, you have areas where I think you ...

I don't write much poetry, but I agree with Kamas. The rhyme is off, and I think you could go back in a sort out a few sentences as far ...

Hello, I'm Kate :) Wow! This is great! You captured my attention from the very beginning. I love the fact that the twins are so close. This is a very ...

I found this very interesting. You have a completely different view than me, but that's one thing I like about it. Wouldn't you think that being strong is about knowing ...

Hello, I'm Kate. I'm not going to bother going into grammatical errors,because it has been done, and there are none too pressing. I simply want to say, I love this ...

Hello, I'm Kate and I'll be reviewing you. (Funny how a lot of us start a sentence like that.) This has some good potential. I like how you have Romero ...

Hello, I'm Kate. I have read chapter one as well, and I love this ending. I believe you rush in some places,like the beginning, but you can easily smooth that ...