wonderingkate

Hey, Ollie! This was beautiful. I really liked it. I think a lot of people can relate to not feeling good enough for the person you love. Keep writing! I ...

Hey, Mage! I thought this was great. You described everything well, but as Mia said, the ending was a little confusing. I'm not going to go deep into grammar, because ...

Hello, I'm Kate. This was great! I really did love it. (Which is saying something xD) I hope you begin writing the other chapters soon. You did have punctuation errors, ...

Hello, I'm Kate. This was nice. I want to know what happens! Just my opinion, but maybe you should end the date in the first chapter because this chapter was ...

Hey, I'm Kate. I see that you are new, so welcome to YWS! I should let you know, although you have probably already been told by the mods, that there ...

Hey, I'm Kate. I loved the first one, as well as this one! The plot is very intriguing. I can't wait for you to post more! You did have grammatical ...

Hey, Leth! This is brilliant! You definitely fixed all the grammar errors (As far as I can tell). I love how you added Lethero's dad into the story. I can't ...

Bonjour! I really like this plot. I almost started crying in some places! Idiot, I thought as I crawled off of him, how can you tell him something that isn't ...

Bonjour! The plot of this story is wonderful! I got wrapped up in the emotions of this story from the very beginning. You have grammar mistakes, but I'm not going ...

Hey, Hope! This was great. You captured my attention from the very beginning. I would like to see where you take this. There are only a few nit-picks! But she ...

Bonjour, Jessey! I thought this was pretty good. Although, you have things you need to practice on. This is just me, but I would watch your grammar. Too many grammar ...

Bonjour, Elinor! This was pretty good, but as Meg stated above, you have a few things you need to work on. I didn't find much grammar errors, so you should ...

Bonjour, Lethero! Sorry it took me so long to review this. I really enjoyed reading this story and can't wait for you to expand. There are very few grammar errors! ...

Bonjour! I'm Kate. I liked this, but you left me wanting more! Although, that's a good thing. :D Grammar: “I was actually looking for you,” She said in a nervous ...

Bonjour! :) I am Kate. This story was so sad! I want everything to turn out okay. Consider writing more? *begs* Nit-picks: The whole world was shaking, no, not the ...