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Great poem. Couldn't find anything wrong with it =)

Loved the whole thing, the emotion was overwhelming! In a recent visit to the Vatican I realised just how much some people want to find God and they look so ...

Loved it and it's kinda true =)

lol. I really liked the description in this, it was great! I would suggest putting the lines in one stanza a little closer together as it made it a little ...

I have been through the same thing myself just last year and I think your poem was a good expression of the emotions that you feel when it happens. It ...

I liked this and the way it shows how technology is killing us etc. Especially with the current economic crisis, if we turned virtual would everything just go to ruins? ...

This made me laugh, my Spanish is not very advanced so I can't spot any mistakes (I don't think there were any anyway) but I loved the ending =)

Awww this was so cute! I love the little part about the cat, it was sweet. Sorry this review is pretty much pointless!! ~Dommy lol same here I loved it ...

This felt like a scene from a chick-flick, I liked it quite a lot. Guess the mistakes are already covered but I don't think there were that many obvious ones.

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Nice, though I don't really understand where you're coming from but I think I have an idea =).

Wow, I loved it, the portrayal of the emotions was very strong and, I'm no expert, but I don't think there was anything wrong with it =).

Loved it, though I think you put a semi-colon in as a type error at the start =)

I liked this poem and the description was really strong but the rhyming seemed a little off towards the end.

This was really sweet :)