wombat

I liked the emotion and the way you portrayed the community's reaction to Francis. It's always the same, no matter where you go, if you ask someone about their street ...

I liked the imagery and the way I don't really know what the main character is crying about, but it scares me anyway =). I loved the whole thing but ...

Hee, this was a cute poem, kind of reminded me of the advert that's going around (for Orange, I think) where a cyclist is saying stuff like 'I am the ...

Wow. The language made me shiver, no-one in my school seems to own a dictionary so it seems so new to me =). I really liked this even though I ...

I liked this and if it's true then I can't imagine how hard it was for you. Just one thing: you didn't invite me to your precious wedding with whom ...

Wow, that was really short! I didn't really get it, but I liked the language that you used. One thing, though: Her presence stole the room, Heads turned. Hearts filled ...

This seemed a lot like a mcr song and I really liked it. A few things, though: I will see you I swear I will fined you Shouldn't 'fined' be ...

Wow, I really liked this, it sounded like the shower scene from Psycho or one of the horror stories your ten-year-old cousin always hears in school and likes to repeat ...

I thought this poem was good, especially for a first post. It was quite realistic and the meaning was quite clear. One thing though: And stuck it close you Now ...

This kind of reminds me of my cousin's ex, though she didn't kill herself :). He never grasped her hand real tight, When they walked alone at night. I think ...

This poem is really catchy! I love the rhythm and the way the poem just works & I understand what you mean but I think you should expand it a ...

Wow, I really loved this poem. That story has been told to me so many times in so many different ways every Easter but I think this one is my ...