wolf9599

Awww, now I wanna watch My little pony just to see Derpy! xD. I love that name, too.. Anyways, I think this is a cute poem. I like how you ...

I liked this poem :). It was simple, ryhmed well, and was fun to read =P. Some suggestions: I love the count down, I love the easy flow, too, but ...

As the other person said, this does need some work, but over all, it isn't that bad :). I didn't get this part, "For a moment, I wish I could ...

This was a very good poem! Though short, it was very moving. I espically loved what you said at the end: I watched the night sky bleeding, as screams come ...