wishonafallingpetal

This was good. I especially loved the last verse. I can't really think of anything bad to say about it, so good job.

This is really great. At times it falls a little flat with emotion and it starts to lose its flow near the end but other than that, it's good.

This is a very different poem. It's a bit dark, but expressed well and smoothly. Keep writing, I like it.

I liked this. You took a feeling that many people have and expressed it well. I think that formatting and spelling could have been done more carefully, but the idea ...