wingsofaphoenix

Wow. I'm absolutely blown away. I really enjoyed this poem for a number of reasons. I love how you combined realistic things that have the potential to be boring, with ...

I really liked the lyrics and the mood they set- two lovers protecting each other through the 'bitch' that is life. The thing I like most is the chorus because ...

I enjoyed this poem a lot and could connect to it immensely. I enjoyed that the questions you asked got more and more intense but never melodramatic and you stayed ...

I really like the images that you painted here. I was able to see very clearly what was happening and was really drawn in by the poem which is fantastic. ...

I really like how you used questions in this- it adds to the mood of frustration. However, maybe you could put some more statements in there instead of just questions ...

I found this poem easy to read in some ways, but I didn't find it very satisfying. It was a bit too repetitive which could be fixed by changing the ...

I really liked all of these stanzas. I felt they conveyed a real feeling of being at peace. I especially liked the last stanza as it relates two things that ...

I really really enjoyed reading this because I could connect to the poem and was drawn in by your words. I found the mixture of emotion and physical action satisfying. ...

I think for what you were trying to portray, you made the mood a bit too jolly. I don't like the last line, either, because it's too 'in your face' ...