wildnaturespirit

Sorry, I was working on revising this. But I got busy with school stuff. I hope to have it revised by next week, or I might just do it tonight.

Thanks for the reviews! I really appreciate it. I edited it, and tried top fix some of the things you all mentioned. I hope its an improvement.

I agree some of it seems really short and fast, like parts to a really short story. If this is going to be longer than perhaps more emotion and thought ...

Wow, I thought this was really good. I can't wait to see where it goes. But some of the behaviors seemed a little... unwolfish. To make your wolves more convincing ...