wiggy1

I like your story, one of my favourite bits was about the father who said joining the army would teach him discipline, he's like the grumpy old guy saying " ...

Well Done. That was a great piece of work, one of my favourite bits of it was when you said how the three dogs teeth snapped inches away from Hermione's ...

First off I think this a great start which will develop into and exciting story, when you telling us about how she was loosing control of her horse, try to ...

OK first off I think you had some fantastic dialogue there that really brought the characters to life. Secondly I was wondering in the first few lines I saw [ ...

Hi there I like the way your poem makes the reader think about why our heart beats, the line Like a forest, thick as night it creates a picture for ...

Fantastic I like your story because of the way the character is narrating the story which helps me to know what the character is like, what phrases they use in ...

Hi This was a great story, I couldnt find any grammar or spelling mistakes I especialy like Riley, you dont see many books that have animals such as dogs being ...

Hello wiggy here. :D Firstly i like the way the story is going, it makes you wonder why did elder Abel say she's going to need sleep, and why has ...

i quite liked this poem because it has a lesson for us all to learn and that is to forgive ourselves and learn from our mistakes, apart from the flow ...

great poem like all the others i like the way you layed it out and the descriptions created great images quite a nice mysterious poem good job :D wiggy :D