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Re: Shadow Princess (Chapter One)
Hi EmmaKi! (Again) I'm back! Once again, I really liked this chapter, but there are a few teeny notes I have for you. In the first sentence, I feel like ...
Jun 8, 2015 -
Re: On the Edge
Hi Snowfire! First of all, I agree with Tallon45 that the ending was amazing. I can't wait to read more. I just have one quick question. Does Magic like Gordan ...
Jun 4, 2015 -
Re: Parallel Needs: Prologue
Hi BEWriter! First of all, great work! I am hooked and excited for the next chapter. I just have a few quick notes though. First of all the sentence, "Thinking ...
Jun 4, 2015 -
Re: A Blink of an Eye
Hi PaytonS! Great start for a beginning writer! I have a few quick notes though on how you can improve. At first, the transition from the bedroom to the book ...
Jun 3, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1 - The Firestone Tower
Hi Zen! I really like what you have done to this writing, and it is some to the best work I have seen. You used very descriptive and well thought ...
Jun 3, 2015