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wiccaryan

  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Innocence

    I enjoyed this piece, but i didn't love it. Characters seem to be capable of development, but the emotional foundations and depth are lacking thus far. Also, the use of ...

    Apr 21, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Silhouettes of Life

    I actually get this poem, it seems people don't This poem is a train of consiousness, right? It's someones thoughts. I'm guessing its someone who is really distraught or truly ...

    Apr 12, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Reality

    I love this poem, it was so beautifully tragic. I'm really unsure on the format and style, its very broke which actually relates to the characters feelings, a clever thing ...

    Apr 12, 2009
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Sweet, Rotted Creature

    I love this poem, its wonderfully eerie. I have to say at first, i thought it was about a woman suffering a miscarriage, i have no idea whether this is ...

    Apr 12, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: In Repair

    I think your being very hard on yourself, i think its a very good piece which i enjoyed reading and would happily read again, "I'm not fully put together, My ...

    Apr 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: I love you

    I like this poem, i like it but fail to love it. This poem reminds me of how i've felt about people i used to be in love with, which ...

    Apr 10, 2009
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: “Full stop”

    I love this piece, its well written and keeps to a steady rhythm. On the other hand, i found it really confusing, i thought the broken sentences were a bit ...

    Apr 10, 2009


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