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Re: Innocence
I enjoyed this piece, but i didn't love it. Characters seem to be capable of development, but the emotional foundations and depth are lacking thus far. Also, the use of ...
Apr 21, 2009 -
Re: Silhouettes of Life
I actually get this poem, it seems people don't This poem is a train of consiousness, right? It's someones thoughts. I'm guessing its someone who is really distraught or truly ...
Apr 12, 2009 -
Re: Reality
I love this poem, it was so beautifully tragic. I'm really unsure on the format and style, its very broke which actually relates to the characters feelings, a clever thing ...
Apr 12, 2009 -
Re: My Sweet, Rotted Creature
I love this poem, its wonderfully eerie. I have to say at first, i thought it was about a woman suffering a miscarriage, i have no idea whether this is ...
Apr 12, 2009 -
Re: In Repair
I think your being very hard on yourself, i think its a very good piece which i enjoyed reading and would happily read again, "I'm not fully put together, My ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: I love you
I like this poem, i like it but fail to love it. This poem reminds me of how i've felt about people i used to be in love with, which ...
Apr 10, 2009 -
Re: “Full stop”
I love this piece, its well written and keeps to a steady rhythm. On the other hand, i found it really confusing, i thought the broken sentences were a bit ...
Apr 10, 2009
