whitewolfpuppy

Well when I say give her emotions more detail. I mean by, describe it. What makes her feel that way, what does she do about it, what can she do, ...

No problem! :) I am always here to help.

Again, the spelling is alright. As far as I know, color can be spelled colour. It all depends on where you are from. If you wish to keep it, go ...

There you go!:D

Lol you put the / in the wrong side of the quote

You say [quote] The penguin was amazing [/quote ]

Ha- I am ready for anything you can throw at me! :D Oh alright, I thought there was. You can post the next section when ever you are ready. I ...

Haha okay. Basically you are going to say the word quote at the beginning and put the brackets around it. [ ] So it will look like [ quote ] ...

By doing quote in between [ ] and the last part /quote between [ ] Like this, without the dashes. [-quote-] [-/quote-]

Well, that is a good way to explain it. It is fine, I need to double check myself sometimes as well. Ha- but over all you did great. Keep on ...

Thank you for the detailed help! It will help me a lot because sometimes I don't notice I am changing the tenses. Thank's so much.

Thanks so much!

Thank you so much! Now that I read the second sentence, you are right. It is a bit weird. xD Thank you

Sorry about that! It was supposed to say David. I thought I had fixed all of the errors and Alpha's plural mean both male and female. Alpha is male and ...

Personally these are just a few things that just came to me one day. There is nothing special about them. I was sitting outside with my laptop doing some free ...