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Interesting! You have some good ideas and this piece reminds me of Douglas Adams (Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy), who happens to be one of my favourite authors! Were you ...

This was brilliant. Your vocabulary and style are great. Clever, funny, and with a little hint of irony. Amazing what you can write about with these little things people barely ...

Excellent! I wish this was longer! I love your writing style! It draws the reader in and is unique. Very good! I liked the idea of listening to a phone ...

This is very sad. I've been in this poor girl's shoes, and let me say you do an excellent job of conveying the frustration and sadness that comes from parents ...

Hey. Good job on this. Is that footnote at the bottom accurate? Planning on making this into a series? Let me give you some advice: Make it more interesting. No ...

Woah! Are you me or something? Seriously though, that first part about lack of a confidence hits home for me. I dealt with something similar when I was younger. This ...

That was incredible. Very well done! It was beautiful and intense. There were a few grammatical errors and... interesting choice of words, but barely worth mentioning. For some reason the ...

Hey, thanks for your review of my work! I'm here to return the favour. This seems interesting, but confusing. I'm no expert of poetry, but I feel like it needs ...

Hey! It's my first review, so let's hope I do this right. To be honest, your story wasn't really scary at all. Sorry! I think you've got a good idea, ...