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Re: In an Eggshell
hi I see what you mean being more of a poetry person, it was quite creative, i love the metaphor of the eggshell it was different, interesting. Also like how ...
Sat Jan 17, 2009 6:46 am -
Re: a cruel reality
hello again, talk about some serious sibling rivalry, I mean I've had some fights with my brothers before but they have never gotten that serious. but beyond that it makes ...
Thu Jan 15, 2009 4:20 am -
Re: The Letter - Chap. 1
I'm serious i love your character they all seem to have a lot personality. your plot is very interesting, I really start to care about what gonna happen to lilly ...
Thu Jan 15, 2009 3:44 am -
Re: Night Rain part 1
it was awesome the detail in night rain was so vivid that i felt I was actually there. the charecter were so strong and 3d I felt i knew them ...
Wed Jan 14, 2009 6:01 am -
Re: Indigo - chapter 1
your piece seems to have a lot of potential. The scene is so true life, because some time you can't really greive and it feels like you have to put ...
Wed Jan 14, 2009 4:55 am
