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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: In an Eggshell

    hi I see what you mean being more of a poetry person, it was quite creative, i love the metaphor of the eggshell it was different, interesting. Also like how ...

    Jan 17, 2009
  • Short Story » General, General Re: a cruel reality

    hello again, talk about some serious sibling rivalry, I mean I've had some fights with my brothers before but they have never gotten that serious. but beyond that it makes ...

    Jan 15, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: The Letter - Chap. 1

    I'm serious i love your character they all seem to have a lot personality. your plot is very interesting, I really start to care about what gonna happen to lilly ...

    Jan 15, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Night Rain part 1

    it was awesome the detail in night rain was so vivid that i felt I was actually there. the charecter were so strong and 3d I felt i knew them ...

    Jan 14, 2009
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Indigo - chapter 1

    your piece seems to have a lot of potential. The scene is so true life, because some time you can't really greive and it feels like you have to put ...

    Jan 14, 2009


The inner machinations of my mind are an enigma.
— Patrick Star