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Wow, I fully understand this poem. It is total tragedy when people's minds start going. After my great-grandma''s second stroke she started thinking that her husband was really her highschool ...

Confusing, I honestly didn't understand. Maybe I wasn't supposed to, but what I suggest is getting rid of some of the fancy stuff that went along with it, people get ...

I do like it, though I have to say I had to read it through a LOT before I could fully understand it. I tend to read things out loud ...

First off, I like the poem. It's well written and consistent, but I do have a few minor things to point out: If you could hear what I was thinking, ...

Make me out of plastine, So you can mould me how you like. Make me out of something real, Like a flame or just some sunlight. Though I like the ...

I think this is a great idea and a good poem, but it could be better. Rushing as fast as I can.. . But will I be on time? Will ...

I like the poem a lot, the first stanza is amazing and makes a lot of sense. The second stanza seems like a dumbed down repeat of the first. When ...

I love this poem a lot, it's really deep and has a ton of weight in it's meaning. Great job. The dark shields our eyes It battles the truth and ...

I have to admit, this is great and funny and all that, but is it a poem? I can't seem to find a rhythm or a beat of any kind. ...

This is actually pretty good, I liked the flow and the rhyme scheme. The only thing I suggest is adding more to it. It is really straight forward but the ...

I have to say, you might possibly have a good idea and/or story line, but this isn't really a poem. You're trying to write too much without making it flow. ...

This is a really good poem with a really good theme, but I think you are WAY too hung up on rhyming. First off, your rhyme scheme is totally wack, ...

Rawr, okay great poem first off, but it did lack a certain emotion. I think you have the makings of a great poem, but I do think you should add ...

I have to be honest, I don't understand this at all. It's short and it's unspecific and the topic jumps every other line (which isn't saying much since there's not ...

I have to say, the poem was good though it was definitely not my cup of tea. I liked it as a poem, but it was a bit too gory ...