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Re: The Beast
I love it you leave us hanging then BAM! soccer. I was waiting for the monster to come and eat you.
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Your Ad Here
HAHAHAHAHAHA. Very nice I love this. Don't change a thing keep it seriously funny.
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Re: Peeled Naked
The first line caught me, "Meanings wear words like you," I had to go back and reread it, not because I didn't understand, but to make sure I did. Your ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
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I love when a poem can paint a vivid picture of violent acts in my head with few words. Brutality is what this makes me envision and I loved every ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Don't Come To My Funeral
I like this. The way you paint a vivid picture using metaphors like onions on their sleeves and crocodile tears help portray the insincerity of those that have supposedly come ...
Jun 19, 2011 -
Re: Darkness
I love this the subtle hints at the corner of my vision hinting at darker things. It speaks so much with so little, which is often hard to come by ...
Jun 19, 2011
