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Re: No Match
i thought that it was very good. it was short sweet and to the point. i can really tell that u put the emotion into it because of the word ...
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Re: Princess Jade
i thought it was good really good. great description and marvelous emotional revealing in the words. you really painted a picture inside of my mind of a beautiful young princess ...
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Re: leave me
i thought it was very good. the topic seemed well thought out. but i have a couple questions. when you say "leave me to my grief to my life" now ...
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Re: Friends
that poem was wonderful. you truly hit the depth of what a true friend is supposed to do. it really explains what you should be looking for and what other ...
Jul 11, 2009 -
Re: Wolf Moon-Chapter 1: Orders
i thought it was very nice. I was intrigued almost the moment i started reading it. It had a good hook and a great first paragraph or so. You had ...
Jul 11, 2009
